2 words 1 minute

Equipment respect

This year the 2018 winter Olympics they showed a huge amount of respect and used lots equipment.
There were lots countries coming together to compete with other countries they showed lots of
teamwork and showed lots of respect.
They all played a fer game of sports and this was held at the Pyeongchang at south korea the
countries had fun and there were lots of sports.

They all showed  respect to all of the  county.  
The winter Olympic opening ceremony was at 1924 and they all showed friendship and
lots of teamwork.
They all had so much fun and there where first place winners and second winners
and third place winners and they all got medals and they had fun at the end of the day.

Today I used my word list.

Next time I need to change my words to make then more powerful.   

124 words

Today we used the ‘2 words 1 minute’ challenge to write a description about the Winter Olympics. After talking in pairs about the things we knew about the winter Olympics we created a list of words (vocabulary) that would help us write our description. We chose the words ‘equipment’ and ‘respect’ to help us think about what we were going to write.

We talked about ideas with a partner, then we had 1 minute to put those ideas into sentences. We had to try our best to use all the words on our vocab list. After the minute was up we had 2 minutes to reread what we had written and make changes if anything didn’t make sense or if we had words and punctuation in the wrong place. When we finished checking we had 2 more minutes to carry on writing our descriptions.