Today I have been doing the holiday blogging challenge it has been really fun doing this. This was my first day that I have done to fine things about rainbow's end. It was really fun researching about rainbow's end.
Hi Hajera I like that you have made a DLO that contains all of the rides, the prices and the height all in one. One that I think that you should change is the colours they look really bad. Keep up the great work. Eric
Hello Hajera,I like some of the colours you have used. I also like how you have wrote the Kids Kingdom Pass as well. Next time you should at least do 2 colours. Keep up the great work!
Hello Hajera good job on completing the first activity for the Holiday Blogging Challenge I think the school leaders did such a fantastic job on it. I really enjoy your DLO and how colourful you made it so that it represents Rainbow's End itself which is a really great idea. I also like how you even put in more information, good on you! Amazing job.
Greetings Hajera, I did the Rainbow's End activity too. I like the way you named the rides. I also like the way you wrote down how much the rides cost. Awesome Work!
Hi Hajera! I like your DLO because it is detailed and it is really cool with all the colors. I really don't have any advice for you because nothing you need to work on or anything so great job! - Florence
Hi Hajera I like that you have made a DLO that contains all of the rides, the prices and the height all in one. One that I think that you should change is the colours they look really bad. Keep up the great work.
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Hello Hajera,I like some of the colours you have used. I also like how you have wrote the Kids Kingdom Pass as well. Next time you should at least do 2 colours. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteHello Hajera I like some of the colors you have choose. I also like how you wrote your google drawing like a Rainbow's End menu. This is amazing work.
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Hi Hajera
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you blogging these holidays. I like how you made your DLO colourful but I think you added a bit to much colour.
Great Work
Hello Hajera good job on completing the first activity for the Holiday Blogging Challenge I think the school leaders did such a fantastic job on it. I really enjoy your DLO and how colourful you made it so that it represents Rainbow's End itself which is a really great idea. I also like how you even put in more information, good on you! Amazing job.
ReplyDeleteGreetings Hajera,
ReplyDeleteI did the Rainbow's End activity too. I like the way you named the rides. I also like the way you wrote down how much the rides cost.
Awesome Work!
Hello Hajera
ReplyDeleteI really like this DLO you have created for the holiday blogging challenge and how you have put heaps of information about rainbow's end.
Hi Hajera!
ReplyDeleteI like your DLO because it is detailed and it is really cool with all the colors. I really don't have any advice for you because nothing you need to work on or anything so great job! - Florence
Hey Harjera
ReplyDeleteGreat job on finishing the first activity from Day 1 . I like how you put more details .Great Work.