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Revising Writing

  Today I have been learning about the word DRAFT. DRAFT is like an acrostic poem. Each letter of this word means something in writing. Today we have been focusing on the D. D stands for Delete. In class Miss Paton shared with us a piece of writing in winch we had to delete, take out words and change sentences. Here is my piece of writing.

Miss Paton’s copy

Miss Paton has a cat. His name is Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always come to my house wanting food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He does not like my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.

My copy

Miss Paton has a cat he's called Oscar, he is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain. He likes to sniff rubbish. He always come to my house for food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He dont like my laptop. He would sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give the attention.

XtraMath

This is my work from toady and this is my work XtraMath and I have done good.

My Lunch colours

This is my my Lunch colours and I bone good with my work.

XtraMath

   This is my work XtraMath I bone good with my work. 

what's in my larch box

This is my work today and I bone good with my work.

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This is my work from today and I bone good with my work.

XtraMath

This is work from today and I have done good my wrok.

purple Group KWL chart on guide Dogs

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Dance Reflection

Hajera                                        

       Term 2:   Friday 3 July

                                                           Dance 1

We learning to uas elements of dance to develop a movements vocabulary based on a story “in the beginning.“ We used shapes like stretched,angular,curved and twisted and Mrs Eeles taught us and thanks for it.

                                                  -hand dance.

                                                  -kowhaiwhai patterns.

                                                  -magnetic hands.

                                                  -kaleidoscope.    

This is my work from toady and I have done good with my work.

XtraMath

This is my work from today and I have done good with my work.

XtraMath

This is my work from today and I done good with my work.